Hello, I have a few questions (for book)

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    Hello, I am foreign writer, and I work for one book. This book tell about marine reserve officer (female) from U.S.A.
    I'm want to ask few questions:

    1. Situation: 3 armed enemies, marine is unarmed. One enemy at 12 o'clock, one at 8, and last at 10. They have submashine guns, pistols, and knifes. This action takes place in civil building (near many civils). What will to do american marine, for neutralise enemies?
    2. Female marine officers in U.S.A. exists?
    3. Very common question. Officer's (any, and not only marine, and not main hero of my book) bride was raped and brutally murdered, but murderer was not imprisoned. What will to do officer, for restore justice?

    Thanks,
    regards!
     
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    Hi, LumeInNox! From where you are?

    Do you want to tell us about females, about USA or about Marines? I hope, you don't want write about thing, what you don't know. Think about your readers, think, what do you want to tell them.

    Insufficient information. What is a status of state, what is an actual status of marine, what is an actual status of enemies? For example: there are war between USA and China. Marine officer is working with military intelligence somewhere in Australia (neutral country), masked as barmen. Enemies are three China military officers, that just want to drink. May be, best way for their neutralisation will be add some clonidine in their beer.


    Yes. They are about 5% of all marine officers. There are even 3 (AFAIK) generals.

    As officer, he had to report to his chief. As human - there are different variants.
     
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    Hi, YarS! I'm from RF.

    Excude my bad English. :)
    Not only about females, not only about Marines, and not about USA. My story about one character, J. She is marine officer (second lieutenant) in reserve.

    In world of my novel acts two international organizations: H, and L. L want rule the world, and destroy all humanity. H want save world. L is big organization with a few layers: secret society, military organization (they have own army), and etc.

    J lives in Los Angeles. One day, L attacks to her city. J survives, and runs away from destroyed megapolis. L, throught his people, declares J as enemy of state. M, H agent, rescues J, and left a last will - let J take her place in H.

    Ok. Main hero is J, she working in Russia, Moscow, masked as English teacher. Enemies are three L agents. One L agent is "soldier of glamour", two others - tough guys, which can break bricks about own heads. Place - school lobby.

    Ok, thanks.

    Ok, thanks. For example?
     
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    Russian Federation? А почему тогда в поле "фром" стоит Вашингтон, округ Колумбия?

    Фигня вопрос. Тут у большинства не лучше.
    "- How much watch?
    - Six watch?
    - Such much?
    - For whom how!
    - Finished MGIMO?
    - Ask!"

    Вопрос в том, что именно Вы хотите рассказать читателю. Нет, конечно, можно нарисовать очередную борьбу "Горбатого с Сопливым", но стоит ли? В книге должна быть идея, её нужно до читателя донести, а для этого её нужно самому сформулировать.

    What is idea of a book?


    Just describe the whole situation. Something like:
    "Войдя в класс, она сразу заметила тридцать три утюга, выставленные на подоконнике. "Вот-те раз" - подумала Маша. "Вот тебе два" подумала в ответ Леся, встав из-за парты, и достав из своего декольте револьвер калибра 33 дюйма. Двое её помощников уже успели разбить о свои бестолковки по кирпичу, и сейчас тихо сидели на месте, счастливо улыбаясь и пуская пузыри. Маша экстренно вышла в астрал и вызвала из него тройку демонов, приказав им атаковать противника"...
    Как там у группы Ленинград?

    english subtitles aviable.
     
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    I'm traveling.

    Ok.

    Главная идея в следующем: пока весь мир между собой ругается, у него за спиной может ненароком вырасти исполин, который играючи всех объединит, а затем похоронит.

    Idea of a book: while the whole world among themselves swears behind him can born giant, which effortlessly combine all and then destroy.

    =)
     
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    Funny conception, but not new. If world will fight - there, may be, will be globalisation. If world will not fight - there, may be, will be globalisation, too...
     
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